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Fantasy or reality

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Thank you to everyone reading the story. I have posted it without an editor since finding an editor as a first time writer is difficult. I do believe I will write more in the future, but this story is complete. I decided to make this blog post to explore a couple of items that have popped up in the comments or that are on my mind. The first comment posted was "Oh hell, another weak-willed, willing cuck story. YUCK!" I laughed since the codes pretty much declared that without having to click on the story, but it did make me think about what people want in fantasy. I am lucky that I have a wonderful wife and children. I live most people's fantasy on a daily basis, but would anyone be interested in reading about it? I know the stories I find most interesting are situations outside of the norm. I also find it very interesting to see where people draw lines.

The most recent comment on the story is "Jim did NOT sign up for what just happened. He was blind sided by what Kris just did. This is not the new relationship he wanted.
I am going to set this story aside for a while. Maybe you will surprise me. As of now you have left no clues that Jim will get a life he wants. He wants to be important to Kris as a person, not as a toy. And if that can't happen with her... then Kris needs to show her love for him and let Jim go." I understand this sentiment and the poster may not want to finish the story. Every action has consequences. I understand this and that is why I wrote fantasy. It is much safer to explore consequences in a story than to risk them in real life. I know the only constant in life is change. Do husbands really think they can push their wife to be with another man and it won't change them? If you truly love someone so much that you will do anything for them, how far is anything? Are there some actions that even when done in a consensual manner as an experiment, cross a line that can't be gone back from?

I welcome any feedback and apologize for any continuity mistakes. The story started off small without a destination and I just kept making decisions that allowed the characters to develop. I think the personalities of each main character will be more developed by the end of the story and hopefully they are relatable (even if their actions and decisions are not!)

 

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