I was in a hurry yesterday, so I posted Chapter Two of my story A Submissive Sibling before I did a final edit. Normally, I give a finished chapter a rest of at least a few hours then read it out loud to myself, looking for typos and things that don't sound right. I did that today and uploaded a revised Chapter Two just now. No huge changes, but mostly just some fixes with dialog and a few small typos sniped.
Thanks to everyone who has read it so far! It's approaching 50 votes and I'm pretty happy with the score so far.
Malcom Walker
Nashville, Tennessee