Reviewed:
This is a story that was hard to finish.
David has his plan laid out through college and beyond. This is a good thing.
The editing was good as was the word usage. (I'm a bit of an asshole when it come to proper word usage and such.)
My main complaint was that it read like a list. Granted a list with sentences but there was minimum character interaction or development.
The only interaction was a paragraph or two about a teacher who didn't grade properly. A paragraph of interaction between David and a friend and a mugging attempt. The last two were taken care of in less than three paragraphs.
It's a good story if you like this style of writing.
Enjoy