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Author's Description:
The law does not concern itself with trifles. Tormenting a young woman just because she’s no Anna Nicole Smith was nothing the law would deal with. George’s childhood friend Bex studied law to find some other way to get even. Revenge was brutal and not as sweet as Bex had hoped. The best revenge is to live well. George saw to that.
Size: 118 KB (21,922 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Cheating, Pregnancy

Review by Finbar_Saunders   [other reviews by Finbar_Saunders]

Reviewed:


This story about George and the girl-next-door explores the revenge wrought upon a girl's tormentors. Cleverly, this story tells you the end right at the start.

It's a dangerous ruse, but WTSman pulls off the trick with brilliant sure-footedness. Crucially, the story line takes no liberties with reality. At no time did I get the feeling that this sort of thing wouldn't or couldn't happen.

I recommend this one to you, it's well worth the read.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
 

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